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I stopped making GFX for awhile and closed my shop, because I wasn't having fun when I wasn't improving and trying new things, feeling like it would turn out really crappy. Now I am starting to venture out and trying new things, not caring how it looks. I would like some tips on what could be improved, because I have to start somewhere.
I personally like it, tell me what you think.

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Thanks for the reply man, is there anything you would change in it ?

I feel like the blackness on the left side is taking up too much room and you could add something there. It is like the black is just there to make the picture look complete because you didn't know what to add there.
 
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I feel like the blackness on the left side is taking up too much room and you could add something there. It is like the black is just there to make the picture look complete because you didn't know what to add there.

There was a C4D there, but it didn't look good towards the end so I had to cover it.
 
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There was a C4D there, but it didn't look good towards the end so I had to cover it.

I could tell something was covered. I would only suggest cutting the dimensions so that you don't have as much of that black on the left and it will look pretty damn cool.
 
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I could tell something was covered. I would only suggest cutting the dimensions so that you don't have as much of that black on the left and it will look pretty damn cool.

Actually, give me a minute, I will take out the black and the C4D under it.
 
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It was already fairly dark in the first place, but here it is :biggrin:

Experimental2_zpsee74c81b.png

Damn, that looks a lot better. You can actually see the detail to the left now. I had to put my face to the screen before to see it haha.
 
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Damn, that looks a lot better. You can actually see the detail to the left now. I had to put my face to the screen before to see it haha.


Look at my post again, I dodged it :biggrin:
 
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I like the dodged version better :tongue:

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it C:
Probably gonna see me making a lot more in the show off section xD
 
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