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Just Practicing on my photo-manipulation.
This was for a contest in another site. C&C is always welcome. I would love to keep improving so any advice would be great. Thanks, :smile:

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I feel like the cat doesn't really belong there, would look better without it IMO.
 
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All of it looks out of place...

The render that you have used seems like a good choice with the BG however, putting it in that bubble seems pointless because you've removed it from a scene where it fits. ATM the render looks like it's in the sea. The cat kinda just looks put in there to fill space. The random fractle in the corner isn't doing anything and the BG + Cat looked overly topaz'd or cartooned. Also, you have no need to put a watermark on your work.

IMO you should work on getting just one or two elements perfect then build up from there.
 
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All of it looks out of place...

The render that you have used seems like a good choice with the BG however, putting it in that bubble seems pointless because you've removed it from a scene where it fits. ATM the render looks like it's in the sea. The cat kinda just looks put in there to fill space. The random fractle in the corner isn't doing anything and the BG + Cat looked overly topaz'd or cartooned. Also, you have no need to put a watermark on your work.

IMO you should work on getting just one or two elements perfect then build up from there.


Thanks for the feedback. I like to put a watermark on my artwork. I appreciate all the advice I'll try to implement the advice you gave me on my other upcoming projects.
 
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I love the Quality of the Manip. However, I do agree with what was said above; The cat doesn't really look like it should be there. I also think the bubble could use a little more work as far as blending and tonal perfection
 
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I love the Quality of the Manip. However, I do agree with what was said above; The cat doesn't really look like it should be there. I also think the bubble could use a little more work as far as blending and tonal perfection

Thanks for the helpful tip. I'll look into that next time. :smile:
 
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