Yoshimitsu Sig

Discussion in 'The Graveyard' started by TerminatioN, Jun 30, 2009 with 12 replies and 222 views.

  1. TerminatioN

    TerminatioN Salty Retired VIP Retired

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    Made this today while my internet was down and I was bored.

    Still feel like its 100% done, but idk.




    Without border:
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    With border:
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    With border, without green:
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    Personally I think I prefer it with the border (and green).

    Anyways, let me know what you think.
     
  2. darkFX

    darkFX Member

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    I dont like the green really it just doesnt go.
    Maybe make the backround a little darker and have the border on it.
     
  3. I Am Cornholio

    I Am Cornholio Enthusiast

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    I like it better w/ the boarder too
     
  4. OP
    TerminatioN

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    I didn't at first either, but it grew on me quick. In case you're wondering here is what it looks like without it:
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    The text just doesn't "pop" without it and looks plain and boring.

    Added it to the original post too.
     
  5. Sergeant Menace

    Sergeant Menace Banned

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    I think that the background has to much plastic wrap or whatever filter you used for it, try erasing some or smudging. Whichever looks the best of course. Nice job though :smile:
     
  6. MoRa

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    Yeah what Seargent said.

    The filter you used for the background isn't really good.

    Could have used some C4D's with some different blending options. Or maybe smudge it up a bit.
     
  7. OP
    TerminatioN

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    I disagree. And I like making my own stuff rather than taking things people have already made and sticking them together.
     
  8. Sergeant Menace

    Sergeant Menace Banned

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    Well, it doesn't really matter, if you think it looks good in your opinion then that's your saying and we can't really down you, unless it's helpful or something.
     
  9. OP
    TerminatioN

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  10. Sergeant Menace

    Sergeant Menace Banned

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    This is kind of what I meant by smudging and stuff, I added motion blur, gradient maps, and smudges lol.
    [​IMG]
     
  11. OP
    TerminatioN

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    It's ok... but it has like no detail other than the render. I like detail. Not just random blurry crap.
     
  12. Sergeant Menace

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    Well it was made in like 2 mins lol. Try looking for some tutorials and I'm sure you'll get better :smile:
     
  13. going down00

    going down00 Enthusiast

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    The plastic wrap draws to much attention, You could try removing that and maybe sharpening/blurring too add the wanted detail.
     

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