Duel edit i did with my friend PewFirst part is mine the Second part is his.
:3 I didn't out the black bars on there and Slow mo isn't going to be perfectly smooth when you twixtor someone throwing a nade.Overall: 7/10
Nice Choice of music
Try hard on the widescreen - looks awful
Slow motion at the beginning was awful, too much warp. Looks like you used Vegas slow motion in an attempt to look like Twixtor. Either that or you did use Twixtor or AE default slow motion and your FPS was sh*t.
Color correction is gross.
Only graded yours considering, I assume, that's mainly what you care about.