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I've never really taken any classes or much anything on photoshop. Kind of trained myself. I'm looking to start designing for clothing companies (Street wear to be exact)

I will be starting college for graphic design and web design this coming semester.

This is the first "Real" work piece I've done and sold.

Any and all suggestions will be greatly appreciated.

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Erase parts of the RGB Split to give more of a focal point.
Bit to much empty space for my liking. Maybe make the circle in the BG a bit bigger.
 
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Erase parts of the RGB Split to give more of a focal point.
Bit to much empty space for my liking. Maybe make the circle in the BG a bit bigger.
I agree with the "Too much space". I was wanting to do something totally different, but ended up with this somehow.
It was nothing I spent any amount of time on, Just more or less 10-15 minutes.

The longest part was making the logo. Though again, not the way I wanted it. More or less the way It turned out.
 
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Very nice, clean but I agree with first poster doesn't really have a main focal point
As for 'too much space' I do disagree with that, I feel that the empty space is nice, it keeps it clean... but thats my two-cents :smile:. Other than that, keep up the good work!
 
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Very nice, clean but I agree with first poster doesn't really have a main focal point
As for 'too much space' I do disagree with that, I feel that the empty space is nice, it keeps it clean... but thats my two-cents :smile:. Other than that, keep up the good work!

Thanks Frostys, Though again. It turned out to be nothing I planned on doing. I just had to get something done and posted up, I'm pretty sure If my creative juices were flowing with more allotted time. I could of made something more spectacular.

On a side note, Here is something else I made. It's as minimalistic as possible because I want it to look nice on my portfolio.

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I also used a different brain design for this one, Not sure which one I like best.
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Thanks Frostys, Though again. It turned out to be nothing I planned on doing. I just had to get something done and posted up, I'm pretty sure If my creative juices were flowing with more allotted time. I could of made something more spectacular.

On a side note, Here is something else I made. It's as minimalistic as possible because I want it to look nice on my portfolio.

fOXPd6M.jpg
Make the canvas smaller and the focal bigger. a 450x700 canvas would work well.
Example
http://i.imgur.com/VsxHYiK.png
 
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Thanks Frostys, Though again. It turned out to be nothing I planned on doing. I just had to get something done and posted up, I'm pretty sure If my creative juices were flowing with more allotted time. I could of made something more spectacular.

On a side note, Here is something else I made. It's as minimalistic as possible because I want it to look nice on my portfolio.

====EDIT====
I also used a different brain design for this one, Not sure which one I like best.
fOXPd6M.jpg
Ooohhh! I like that :3.
 
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Ooohhh! I like that :3.

Make the canvas smaller and the focal bigger. a 450x700 canvas would work well.

Thank you both,

Knowledge Knowledge , I couldn't make the image bigger because the scaling would reduce quality.

I made the image in a different Photoshop file than that one and forgot how to make it. The first image I posted is the one I re-made, Higher quality and higher ppi.
 
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Thank you both,

Sarah, I couldn't make the image bigger because the scaling would reduce quality.

I made the image in a different Photoshop file than that one and forgot how to make it. The first image I posted is the one I re-made, Higher quality and higher ppi.
Here is an example what I ment. I rushed this so the quality was reduced a bit.
http://i.imgur.com/VsxHYiK.png
I edited this into my last post too.
 
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Ah, That makes more sense. Much appreciated.

I'm working on now making a low poly image of that design, I absolutely adore low poly art.
 
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Amazing work. Looking forward to seeing more.
 
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Looks decent, keep working on your canvas sizing and focus point.
 
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I honestly love this, can't wait to see more of your work.
 
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