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Yeah, I was very busy in the last few weeks. Anyways, I was experimenting with unicolored pieces and tried different stuff. Hope you all like it.

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I actually was planning to participate in SotFN with the second one, but I was too late, so I made I larger piece. I'm not very satisfied with my text in both because they have some flaws, but whatever.

Opinions and CnC very welcome. Thanks! :smile:
 
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Not a fan of the 1st. The C4D used in it just seems out of place. The 2nd one is nice.

Maybe it's just me but I feel on the 2nd one, the C4D has higher quality than the render. I also feel there is a bit too much empty space. It could have been cropped slightly.

I'm so glad you tried out unicolor tags. I like them. Most people don't care for them.

I like the text on the 2nd one. I feel though your last set of tags were better than these, no offense.

Regardless, keep up the good work brother.
 
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Not a fan of the 1st. The C4D used in it just seems out of place. The 2nd one is nice.

Maybe it's just me but I feel on the 2nd one, the C4D has higher quality than the render. I also feel there is a bit too much empty space. It could have been cropped slightly.

I'm so glad you tried out unicolor tags. I like them. Most people don't care for them.

I like the text on the 2nd one. I feel though your last set of tags were better than these, no offense.

Regardless, keep up the good work brother.
Thank you, really appreciate it. Yeah, the first one really isn't that good. It kind of looks all washed out somehow IMO.

About the second one, there really is lots of empty space. This probably comes from the fact that it's not the usual dimensions I work with, so it was very unusual for me. I was told already that the render seems very lq, but it would take very long to create the same piece with another render, so I simply let it this way.

The main problem with unicolored tags IMO is that you have to make the colors stand out a lot or otherwise it'll turn out very bad and since I never was very good at colors, I thought I'd give it a try to improve my overall coloring-skills.

Maybe it's just me, but I feel like the text on the second one is too small and rather hard to read compared to my other works, so that kind of bugs me. Actually, I even thought about maybe creating a tutorial on text here on S7 (or at least how I make my text :tongue:), but I wasn't sure if people were interested. I might give it a shot tomorrow.

Again, thanks! :smile:
 
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Thank you, really appreciate it. Yeah, the first one really isn't that good. It kind of looks all washed out somehow IMO.

About the second one, there really is lots of empty space. This probably comes from the fact that it's not the usual dimensions I work with, so it was very unusual for me. I was told already that the render seems very lq, but it would take very long to create the same piece with another render, so I simply let it this way.

The main problem with unicolored tags IMO is that you have to make the colors stand out a lot or otherwise it'll turn out very bad and since I never was very good at colors, I thought I'd give it a try to improve my overall coloring-skills.

Maybe it's just me, but I feel like the text on the second one is too small and rather hard to read compared to my other works, so that kind of bugs me. Actually, I even thought about maybe creating a tutorial on text here on 7S (or at least how I make my text :tongue:), but I wasn't sure if people were interested. I might give it a shot tomorrow.

Again, thanks! :smile:


Anytime brother. Looking forward to that tutorial. I know what you mean.

I think the text is fine.
 
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i like the 2nd one
 
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Not a big fan of the 1st one at all so I won't really comment on it, however that 2nd one looks really nice except that their are a few things that I dislike about it.

I don't like monochromatic tags(1 color) it just doesn't appeal to me but as H Holo said it's really about what appeals to you so if you attempted to make it multi color and felt that mono was much better by all means go mono. The 2nd thing that i feel could use some improvment is the placement of your render it's way to off to the right when making signatures or anything really it's much more appealing to follow a rule of thirds, In which your focal point or render lines up with the intersections as shown here.
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KIU bro from what I've seen you post all I see is progress.
 
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Not a big fan of the 1st one at all so I won't really comment on it, however that 2nd one looks really nice except that their are a few things that I dislike about it.

I don't like monochromatic tags(1 color) it just doesn't appeal to me but as H Holo said it's really about what appeals to you so if you attempted to make it multi color and felt that mono was much better by all means go mono. The 2nd thing that i feel could use some improvment is the placement of your render it's way to off to the right when making signatures or anything really it's much more appealing to follow a rule of thirds, In which your focal point or render lines up with the intersections as shown here.
ruleofthirds.jpg


KIU bro from what I've seen you post all I see is progress.
Thanks, I really appreciate it. Although I don't really agree with you on the rule of Thirds. I already kind of had a "discussion" (if you could call it that way) in a thread with H Holo about it, so I don't really want to explain myself again. I do appreciate the feedback though and I do know the render could have been placed slightly more to the left, but again, it's not always all about the rule of thirds IMO (also, I perfectly know how to use, so no need to show me :tongue:).

I guess monochromatic pictures/tags aren't for everybody, but anyways, thanks again. :smile:

i like the 2nd one
Thank you!
 
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Thanks, I really appreciate it. Although I don't really agree with you on the rule of Thirds. I already kind of had a "discussion" (if you could call it that way) in a thread with H Holo about it, so I don't really want to explain myself again. I do appreciate the feedback though and I do know the render could have been placed slightly more to the left, but again, it's not always all about the rule of thirds IMO (also, I perfectly know how to use, so no need to show me :tongue:).

I guess monochromatic pictures/tags aren't for everybody, but anyways, thanks again. :smile:


Thank you!

your welcome
 
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