from someone else's eye things look different sometimes. and to me (not sure if i have a place to talk here ) it seems like the black box in the upper left is a bit distracting and the green lines are a little too opaque. imo i would apply image then sharpen the render a little bit, lighten up the green lines, and take out the black box. and like superdooper said, not really a clear focal point, eyes dance all over. it seems like a lot but i mean it all in the best way and as advice
yea m00t i agree the brighter green wudda helped
ill work on that
i see that it lacks focal pretty clear now ha,
but yea for the above guy^^
look at my tutorials in the tuts section it tells u how in that
its called a clipping mask