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[Fanboy]

I would like inputs on what can be improved & /10
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[Holo]

Shouldn't the front of the text be a bit darker since the light is coming from behind?

 

[Fanboy]

Shouldn't the front of the text be a bit darker since the light is coming from behind?

So you think the layers from the back should overpower the text?

 

[SunkistSwagFX]

So you think the layers from the back should overpower the text?

Yeah i'd agree with what he said. Also I feel as the texture on the text is too strong, you should add a little more greenish glow under the text. Its a little plain down there. otherwise its not mad.