Trust me, its not harsh at all, thanks though, but like i said it was just a style I was checking out, but thanks thoughKay, well.
To start off my CnC, im going to voice my honest opinion.
It looks like, you spammed C4D's on either screen, or linear dodge, and then spammed adjustment layers.
In all honesty, I'd say, Ditch C4Ds for awhile. Work with smudging and fractals/fx a bit. Then when you feel comfortable, come back to the c4d style, but follow tutorials for them.
- Theres no depth, the entire piece looks blurred, and tbh the girl looks like shes behind the C4Ds
- Colors are bad; your'e gonna want to use colors that compliment each other. Look on a color wheel, and pick colors that are on the opposite side, of the 'base' color.
- Adjustment layers; theyr'e bad. They make the girl look red, and pink, and they over blend the piece; thats bad.
KIU dude, while my post may seem harsh, you are actually getting better, it's just a slow progression, pretty sure its the same for all of us, keep practicing!