New Abstract Sig

Discussion in 'The Graveyard' started by Patriot, Feb 4, 2010 with 9 replies and 252 views.

  1. Patriot

    Patriot Enthusiast

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    My First Abstract Sig.
    text is ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    Bump please comment

     
  2. HAGI

    HAGI Enthusiast

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    to be honest man i dont love it
    i think the vectoring is ok
    i just really hate the colours used it makes it look ugly (sorry)
    i think the actual vectoring is good its neat has form and not just thrown together .
    as u said text is ehhh.

    but id like to see it bigger and diff color
    they are pretty easy to change ,
    its very good for a first .
     
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  3. OP
    Patriot

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    Thank you for being honest and i agree with you and will improve it
     
  4. Rob

    Rob Contributor

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    i think it needs a mix up in colors
    maybe lights & dark's.

    maybe new font effects too, the text of its self is not too bad. maybe bigger

    sorry if its hard to understand.
     
  5. Xpargas

    Xpargas Seasoned Member

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    Yeah, that's like diarrhea green.

    Also, maybe make it bigger?
     
  6. xRenzo

    xRenzo Newbie

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    Bigger size and different colors

    Other than that it looks great for a First time
     
  7. SparticusX

    SparticusX Enthusiast

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    xRenzo, are those small pixely thing across the gun water droplets? looks pretty cool xP
     
  8. OP
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    thanks for all of the Constructive Criticism. :smile:
     
  9. Mr NiceGuy

    Mr NiceGuy Newbie

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    Personally I think it works, simple and effective :biggrin:
     
  10. darkFX

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