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xxMatthewo

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I have to say that this is piece of poo poo when compare to most members, but I got photoshop trial 2 days ago, and just have been "mucking" around and this is my first serious attempt

And after some quick browsing this is called "Smudge or Flowing" also something I noticed is that there is no lightning, or very little of it.


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Attempt Number 2, and is a little better. I followed no tut, and it is still a WIP, please CnC that, and what to add, remove etc
2nD:
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1st:
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What can I add/remove/tweak to make better?

PS: The light source was suppose to be in the top middle, but did not come out D:
 
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Better than what I can do.
You should put more work into the words, IMO.
 
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Maybe add a small Gaussian blur on the girl, not too aggressive or big or it will ruin the whole crispness of the signature. Other then that it looks mint to me.
 
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Ehh its decent, you followed a tut, so I cant really give cnc
but anyway
Too monotone
Bad lighting
Reverse flow=bad
smudging and text are decent though
 
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Ehh its decent, you followed a tut, so I cant really give cnc
but anyway
Too monotone
Bad lighting
Reverse flow=bad
smudging and text are decent though
I know about the lightning, yes it sucks.
The flow thing I do not really understand.
Monotone thingy, I can not help it, as the image was already in Black and White, so I had to do that.
And thank you for you opinion, but one question, should I scrap this and start new or adjust this one?
 
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The contrast is bad
that tone is very off putting and harsh
the text is just slapped on there
and to answer your question above scrap it
 
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This is way better than what I can do and is great for a first time. You should try adding some small flares or sparks next time. :wink:
 
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This may just be my preference, but I would make it just a little big bigger. And I would make it brighter.
 
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I know about the lightning, yes it sucks.
The flow thing I do not really understand.
Monotone thingy, I can not help it, as the image was already in Black and White, so I had to do that.
And thank you for you opinion, but one question, should I scrap this and start new or adjust this one?
Cnc is supposed to help people, you can do whatever you want to it, but I would just edit it, add alot more curves/gmaps/photo filters/and brightness/contrast
 
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It's not bad for someone that first tryed it out I'd say that. Keep working on it and you will start to make some amazing things. Just take a look around the Graphic's Tutorial section or the program we offer for new Photoshopers.
 
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I have to say that this is piece of poo poo when compare to most members, but I got photoshop trial 2 days ago, and just have been "mucking" around and this is my first serious attempt

And after some quick browsing this is called "Smudge or Flowing" also something I noticed is that there is no lightning, or very little of it.


Comments N Criticism?

GzhPJ.png


What can I add/remove/tweak to make better?

PS: The light source was suppose to be in the top middle, but did not come out D:
That movie was amazing xD
 
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The image looks great other than the few blimps that the others have filled you in on but i would make the text blend it alittle with the background since it seems that you just threw on white text on it.
 
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I know this is off-topic, but I think your the first to notice who she is.
She is a cutie! I would like to see her dance but it always went into the action scenes :biggrin:
 
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