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Well I made my very first EDIT/OCE and want you guys to tell me how it is..

CONSTUCTIVE Criticism is appreciated :smile:

 
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Here's my opinion - The quality looks insanely good. I like the bubble things floating up. twixtor (slow-mo) was very smooth. the only thing i would change is to be able to here the gun shot and make it sync with the song. Montages always look 10x better when the shots are synced with the music. overall 7/10 (Just because of music syncing)... But keep this up, its a very, very good start to an editing career. Well done.
 
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Here's my opinion - The quality looks insanely good. I like the bubble things floating up. twixtor (slow-mo) was very smooth. the only thing i would change is to be able to here the gun shot and make it sync with the song. Montages always look 10x better when the shots are synced with the music. overall 7/10 (Just because of music syncing)... But keep this up, its a very, very good start to an editing career. Well done.
Thanks for the feedback man :smile:

I am absolutely awful at syncing from what i've tried so far haha! I tried to sync in weird ways not involving the bullet.. Like a boom in the song comes up right when the first twixtor finished and I muffled the music and then un-muffled it on the second to last shot but I completely get what you mean, bullet syncing is much cooler :smile:
 
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Lol, ya it is... i have lots of struggles with my syncing to. Easier said than done
 
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True haha

And keep a look on my channel for more, i'm definitely going to improve in my next one
 
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Thanks for the feedback man :smile:

I am absolutely awful at syncing from what i've tried so far haha! I tried to sync in weird ways not involving the bullet.. Like a boom in the song comes up right when the first twixtor finished and I muffled the music and then un-muffled it on the second to last shot but I completely get what you mean, bullet syncing is much cooler :smile:

Looks Good. Just Try to Sync it up to the Music. If you need Help with Syncing i could help you learn how to sync with twixtor.
Add me on Skype if you want some help Skype: demomodz
 
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Looks Good. Just Try to Sync it up to the Music. If you need Help with Syncing i could help you learn how to sync with twixtor.
Add me on Skype if you want some help Skype: demomodz
Kk thanks man :smile:
 
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For a first edit, you take the cake bro!
It was very good quality. As others have said, syncing up the music will look better, but it's hard to do.
 
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Very nice OCE, definately keep it up. Cant wait to see a montage, I'll sub when I get on my pc.

Btw I <3 MGK, saw him in concert a couple of months ago.
 
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It looked good, music was nice and the Twixtor was done perfectly, however overall it was a little plain. The bubbles w/ muffled music was a neat addition, but other than that it was Twixtor. Try adding a few more effects (although not too much) such as zoom, pixelation/other distortion effects, syncing shots to beats in the music etc.

Still was very nice. :smile:
 
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