This. What people like to see is little streaks.Ok then. you had the same problem as me when i put up my first montage. Your whole montage is of single kills. try and mix it up with like Collaterals . Multikills.
Remmeber a montage doesnt have to be just snipers it can be anything try and do a bit more editing otherwise you got some sweet shots there man keep up the good work!