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Heizmen

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This is my montage, Will be released in 2 - 3 weeks.

The clips are not final. This is a rough copy of it all. The End of the clip is of be dieing, cause it has not been completely edited yet.

Editing done by my self.

Programs, can be listed if you want.

The Gameplay is horrible, it is all being swapped out. Most of that gameplay is old and is not my best work. It does not show most of the good work really. But I will be more then happy to share some of the clips.

Please, Just talk about the editing. Not the gameplay it self.

Thanks.

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ZZRq1xA2GU]YouTube - Triumph Montage video quality test[/ame]

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i dont like the intro, text is plain, and shakes. If you no how, use 3d rendering, it will look better. Plus your beginning kills in the actual montage arent very impressive. People love multikills, just get a ****load of those.
 
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If you read in the whole explanation.. The kills do not matter on this one, it is all being swapped out really. The kills were just put in there to fill it up so I can see what it will look like.

Do not make comments on the kills cause I know they are horrible.

Thanks.
 
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Pretty good editing IMO especially if this is the first thing that you have edited(is it?). I might even consider using you to edit my montage if you are interested, but the only thing I would change is to shake the text a little more at the beginning. I would say to definitely keep that no scope on Isolation also. Pretty good though.
 
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Sure, I am always interested in a job. Eh non of those clips are really that great. Maybe a no scope there, and here but nothing to great. I have a bunch of Exterms I need to be edited in and all of that.

Alright, Thanks for the criticism
 
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Nice intro Kinda of not alot of editing but is just what I like,
 
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Thank you very much. Any more advice?
 
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Heizmen said:
Thank you very much. Any more advice?

linkin park is outdated and common as ****.get backing thats obscure and atmospheric and maybe in relation to the situation on screen.
also youtube is gay.theyll take your music off your video so if you use something almost indie in origin they prob wont bother..and its cool when you get loads of responses asking you what the track is.

change the fonts,they look awful.like a lil kid chose them.

and like mischifous said-multikills is the way to go.anyone can noscope close range.anyone can get dubs/trips..go for more impressive kills,or,funny deaths/kills always go down well.

theres alot of editing software out there.experiment and try to be original-itll get you more respect even though itll take longer.:smile:
 
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****ty capture card get a pinical ultimate :smile: that's what i have and i have sony vegas 9.0 pro. :smile:
 
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