Request I need my logo "tweaked."

[Christopher Galka]

Hello,

I co-own an eSports team and I'm trying to find satisfaction in our official logo. So far I made one from my phone that I like. Then a buddy of mine who's actually good at this stuff took my idea and made a real logo.

I love the layout of his logo but I think the figures from the original look much better. I basically want somebody to improve on the figures while keeping the layout. Also, our official colors are gold and black, so if you could incorporate those colors better I would appreciate it.

To give you a point of reference, this is the original logo and the figures I like;
https://ibb.co/vjpLCkn
https://ibb.co/qdGmdnS

This is the logo that was created from the idea which I love the layout and flag, I just think the figures look too fake and like stick figures.

https://ibb.co/jG1fygF

If someone could combine these concepts, I would be extremely happy. Please let me know what you can do and how much you charge!

You can hit me up here but it may be better on Discord since we'll be image sharing. Kills#5658

Thank you.

 

[Christopher Galka]

Oh, just to add.. At some point I will possibly be getting this logo copyrighted. The logo I made was basically combining google images together lol. The logo that was created was actually drawn so I can own the rights at some point. So this is important.

 

[Fanboy]

You'd be paying a little for an illustration like that bud.

I suggest you have a look on fiver for someone who can illustrate.

 

[AzzidReign]

Best to give Hatchwise a go. To me, there is too much detail in your buddies design. If you look at other logos, they are much more simplistic than even the one you created. The colors need to be thought out before you proceed.

 

[Boar]

Too much going on. Logos needs to be very simplistic and minimalistic.

Maybe only have one assassin cartoon character head merged with name