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[xMLifex]

Tell me watcha think....

 

[Se7eN MasTa]

I little plain, no Background. 6/10

 

[JoeMal]

I'm not so sure about the dissolve, there's something about all the dots I don't like

Also a little too plain, I like the render choice though 5/10

 

[Taco Pirate]

Def leave the disolve out. It makes everything too grainy.

And add a C4D to the background. Maybe that could fill some of the space.