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I like colors.
A lot.​

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Do you like..
..colors too?
 
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Too much random effects, as if you just placed textures in there without positioning them to match the render. Colours? Yeah, lots of colours but looks alright. At least on mobile.

The lights in the middle take all the attention and makes the render unnoticable. Check out rule of thirds or whatever it was called.
 
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I like the colors. But the render just looks copy and pasted on.
 
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I was in AP Art History and this sucks.

if you can't tell that's a joke then we're no longer friends :tongue:
 
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Too much going on. Try removing some some textures, it looks like you just add the render. Take your time doing design, use gradient maps and working on blending. Keep trying, I have faith in you.
 
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I actually kind of like it since it's simple and I enjoy simple. The only thing that I don't really like is the fact the the balls of light are to bright.
 
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Chop this down to a vert tag and your golden. ATM there is way to much empty space. Blending the render at the back of the hat with some lighting would help too.
 
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Chop this down to a vert tag and your golden. ATM there is way to much empty space. Blending the render at the back of the hat with some lighting would help too.
I tried making it blend wit the bg more.

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Black background with random C4Ds placed everywhere and then a white brush used as lighting. Plain and simple a render makes it pop unless your shooting for abstract. Using shapes and colors would be cool.
 
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I tried making it blend wit the bg more.

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Drop the blur and use a black soft brush on the back for the render in this area. Set it to multiply and lower the opacity.
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Looks awesome bro.
 
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