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I'm starting to re-experiment with textures so I made this. It isn't the best, but I'm proud of it.
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This could be your worst and Hayley still would make this 100x better.
 
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A bit to basic. I feel like the render isn't supposed to be there. Just doesn't match the background.
 
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A bit to basic. I feel like the render isn't supposed to be there. Just doesn't match the background.
I agree with you Haley is gorgeous but the background is wrong for this render. It makes the render stick out to much and it's spacey. I understand you chose the colors because of her hair and went with it but that was the wrong way to go.
 
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Your background progression is really nice and clean but, try avoiding renders that don't have much lighting on to work with. I feel that the light source on this is overpowering, also try not centring your renders too much, they look good not centred too. The border is a bit too chunky imo. Keep up the work mate, you've got the talent :smile:
 
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The background seems fine to me, I just don't like the render. You made it too simple and the signature looks plain. Try adding some blur around the render and add some color correction. Keep working on it.
 
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Don't mind the BG either has similar colours to the render, needs work on blending and lighting though, some adjustment layers would help bind it all together.
 
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I like this one. I would lose the weird borders you used and add some brush shading on the render to get the correct effect from the light source but other than that its nice.
 
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