Freestyle C4D

[Raven]

Now I know it's "Chaotic", but It's the point.

It doesn't make it bad, just think of it differently.

 

[Mandela]

I really like it. Like you said it is really chaotic. The mirror render to the left is out of place and doesn't fit in the sig.

 

[Raven]

it's exacly lined up with the other, so it can't be out of place..

 

[Dem Pyros]

It looks pretty sick (awesome), but what is it with the line going through the center to repeat the image?

Why not just cut it short?

That seems the only flaw to me....

9/10

 

[.Merios]

Sorry for the advice on the copy, maybe next time drag the copy of it over a tad so it only looks a tad bit out of place? Anyway, yeah. 7/10. Nice job.

 

[Raven]

Verison 2-

 

[Dem Pyros]

Still don't like the weird black line...

 

[Raven]

So you like it without the black line?

Here's what it would look like...

 

[Dem Pyros]

So you like it without the black line?

Here's what it would look like...

Yeah, i like that better without the black line.

needs text though.

 

[darkest nightmare]

Have to admit, the black bar and copyed image kinda messes up the picture..I see where you where going with it though. But i have to say, stick to the wide screen border add some basic text that blends good maybe a bit of a goldish yellow then play with it until it looks good. But other then that love it...chaos isn't exactly what i care for or like, but very good job on it.

 

[SiK GambleR]

ya i also agree with dempyros, that black bar jsut messes it up i prefer it w/o the black line, w/o the border in fact

 

[Dem Pyros]

ya i also agree with dempyros

doesn't everybody?

Yeah the black bar and the repeat just messed it up. Also with what gambler said it might look better without the border.

 

[.hybrid]

Umm looks like you put the border layer on overlay it would look better if it was a solid black border .......... and it looks to over blended

 

[Raven]

Thanks for the comments guys, and I'll add some text tonight..