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I know its simple i do not need to know.
I made it simple but to look effective.

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It looks simple..
kidding, kidding.
I think overall, it looks great. I don't use C4D so I can't give you any tips, but that flare looks a bit oddly placed.
 
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It looks simple..
kidding, kidding.
I think overall, it looks great. I don't use C4D so I can't give you any tips, but that flare looks a bit oddly placed.
I only use c4d if im doing somehting like this.
As for the flair, its out of place because it didn't look right anywhere else.
 
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Honestly, I have no right to say anything since my tags are mediocre but, to me, it looks the same as any other C4D text. Like, all C4D text on this site, are all the same. The same basic shattered/3D text. Hence, why I hate all YT backgrounds. Some have exceptions but a majority is text just like that. If that's what you were going for, then you nailed the YT text.
 
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I only use c4d if im doing somehting like this.
As for the flair, its out of place because it didn't look right anywhere else.
If something doesn't look like it would fit in don't include it. Forced effects take from the image rather than add to it.
 
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I know this is late, but I have been gone for a while and just looking through stuff.
It looks good to me, you did a nice job on the text and the black pieces in the text I wish were a different color.
Overall it looks good to me :smile:
 
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Looks like something you can make anywhere. Like on a generated site, lol.
 
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The composition in this is non existent. Looks like a wip
 
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