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V1
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V2
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What version do yous prefer and what could i improve on?
 
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I personally like V1 more. Also, work on your blending and pen-tool(if that's how you did it.). You can see his left arm is halfway gone pretty much. Other than that you've done an awesome job with the lights and shadows. Another thing is flow with focal points. You have two focal points here, one is the Eminem render, and the other is your words. It almost creates a clashing flow. Other than that, this is a really good signature all around. 6.5/10
 
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I like that! Looks pretty clean. What font did you use? It goes nice
 
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I personally like V1 more. Also, work on your blending and pen-tool(if that's how you did it.). You can see his left arm is halfway gone pretty much. Other than that you've done an awesome job with the lights and shadows. Another thing is flow with focal points. You have two focal points here, one is the Eminem render, and the other is your words. It almost creates a clashing flow. Other than that, this is a really good signature all around. 6.5/10


The render doesn't show his left arm at all..
GFWqHpq.png

Does show abit of shoulder but.

Thanks alot for the feedback thats what im looking for positive and negative. 
I like that! Looks pretty clean. What font did you use? It goes nice

Thanks!
Font: BankGothic Lt BT
Code:
http://speedy.sh/GNfAH/Bank-Gothic-Light-BT.ttf
There you go boss.
 
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The render doesn't show his left arm at all..
GFWqHpq.png

Does show abit of shoulder but.

Thanks alot for the feedback thats what im looking for positive and negative. 


Thanks!
Font: BankGothic Lt BT
Code:
http://speedy.sh/GNfAH/Bank-Gothic-Light-BT.ttf
There you go boss.

I see it now, in the render it just looks like a minor cut-out issue. If that was your render though, awesome job man. Like I said, just work on those focal points. With that actuallybeing the render 7.5/10 man. Good job.
 
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I feel version 2 is better imo.

I'm not liking some parts are a tad bit oversharpened.

Text placement could be better.

Lighting is decent.

To me, it's strange that the orb/light things are not in the middle. So it's just strange seeing the middle look empty.

Maybe try adding a texture, fractal, or C4D? I don't know.

Not bad though.
 
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I feel version 2 is better imo.

I'm not liking some parts are a tad bit oversharpened.

Text placement could be better.

Lighting is decent.

To me, it's strange that the orb/light things are not in the middle. So it's just strange seeing the middle look empty.

Maybe try adding a texture, fractal, or C4D? I don't know.

Not bad though.



Thanks for feedback still practicing thats my second sig ive done just trying different things untill i know what features a like better.
 
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Both look pretty decent to be fair mate. Keep it up.
 
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