DELLB93
Scotland the brave.
V1
V2
What version do yous prefer and what could i improve on?
V2
What version do yous prefer and what could i improve on?
I personally like V1 more. Also, work on your blending and pen-tool(if that's how you did it.). You can see his left arm is halfway gone pretty much. Other than that you've done an awesome job with the lights and shadows. Another thing is flow with focal points. You have two focal points here, one is the Eminem render, and the other is your words. It almost creates a clashing flow. Other than that, this is a really good signature all around. 6.5/10
I like that! Looks pretty clean. What font did you use? It goes nice
http://speedy.sh/GNfAH/Bank-Gothic-Light-BT.ttf
The render doesn't show his left arm at all..
Does show abit of shoulder but.
Thanks alot for the feedback thats what im looking for positive and negative.
Thanks!
Font: BankGothic Lt BTThere you go boss.Code:http://speedy.sh/GNfAH/Bank-Gothic-Light-BT.ttf
I feel version 2 is better imo.
I'm not liking some parts are a tad bit oversharpened.
Text placement could be better.
Lighting is decent.
To me, it's strange that the orb/light things are not in the middle. So it's just strange seeing the middle look empty.
Maybe try adding a texture, fractal, or C4D? I don't know.
Not bad though.