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2nd time rendering with Pentool

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what do you guys think?



point out things, that need to be fixed? :]
 
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It's very choppy and you missed the bg in a number of areas.
Keep practicing though.
 
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Paste it on a black background. Under her stomach needs work
 
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will do, thanks guys
 
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seems in the feet head and stomach you were in a hurry to chop it, try going more slow and go down to exact points .. ill show you a youtube video that shows your how to make it sooo accurate
 
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seems in the feet head and stomach you were in a hurry to chop it, try going more slow and go down to exact points .. ill show you a youtube video that shows your how to make it sooo accurate

that sounds grand.

the toes were hard to do,
but I think I got that fixed, i'm still working on it
 
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Does this mean I can use it ? XD
 
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Around her foot needs a lot more work, but just keep practicing. Nobody does something perfect on only their second try =D
 
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Really really rough and choppy.

Try doing stuff that is easier to render first, then work your way up.
 
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