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I havent made graphics in about 4-5 months and this is the latest thing ive made, havent finished but almost done :smile:

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It looks good man, keep up the good work :smile:
 
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I'm not too big a fan of the black completely blocking some of the letters, other than that, it's nice.
 
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I see what you were going for with the haze-y effect over the letters, but it makes it difficult to read. That, and the color of the bottom text blends in to the background too much. Other than that, it's not bad.
 
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Definitely too much on the obscuring of the text. It's almost always a cool idea and can turn out amazing, but it's easy to go overboard and I think you may have gone a bit overboard with this and I can't find a reason as to why the text should be so obscured. It also looks a little too "orchestrated", as if you went in with a brush and made fine, clean lines to obscure the text. It could look better if it looked less orderly and more chaotic.

Other than that, it's a solid design and I'd almost expect to see it in a professional work, like an Indie game or project from a full studio.
 
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